Was your home described well enough?
Every day, millions of home buyers across the country begin their search online. They’re looking at photos, comparing features, and reading whatever description of the property was uploaded by the listing agent. Sometimes the descriptions are very basic, and other times they paint a very nice picture of what it’s like to live in the home.
We realize that all agents are not creative writers, but a home’s description should say more than “This is a nice home, and the sellers are very motivated.” We also see descriptive walking tours of the home, which seem unnecessary given the fact that there are usually many photos to view. An example of that is when the description reads like this: “As you enter the home, the living room is on the left. The dining room is on the right, and further down the hall is the kitchen.” Not very inspiring.
We’d rather describe your home on a more emotional level. Here’s a description from a recent listing of ours:
“Ideally nestled high on a hill, close to the end of a quiet cul-de-sac with no neighbors behind or to one side, this spectacular Fairway Canyon home offers everything you could possibly hope to find…and much, much more! Boasting an incredibly open and spacious floor plan with six large bedrooms, it won’t take long for each member of the family to find a place to call their very own. On movie night, gather up the kids and some popcorn in front of the custom-built entertainment center in the family room, and watch your favorite DVD by the fire. Or, for holiday meals with family and friends, take advantage of the over-sized gourmet island kitchen with granite counters, stainless steel appliances, and walk-in pantry to cook up your favorite dinner recipes and desserts! If soft breezes and sunsets are your passion, you might retire to the backyard with freshly brewed mochas, and enjoy intimate conversations with your closest pals. The views of seemingly endless rolling hills and natural habitat are simply breathtaking! You’ll also be located conveniently close to the 60 and 10 freeways, making commuting a breeze. You won’t find a community that offers as much as Fairway Canyon. In addition to the amenities shown on the back of this brochure, there are many additional activities like cinema nights, family bingo, holiday parties (including Halloween haunted houses), neighborhood garage sales, kids’ craft classes, swimming and yoga classes, and more! But hurry, as homes like this one don’t come on the market very often, and when they do…they don’t last long!”
Whew! Yes, it’s a long read, but it really makes a difference in how your home comes across to prospective buyers. If you’re curious as to what we might write to describe YOUR home, give us a call. We believe we can help you sell it…and do so quickly at the best price!